2018写作英语二 饼图 关于支付方式 说两句四六级

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英语二老刘今年跟大家分享过的链接如下:

2018英语二大作文预测1 柱状图 专业学习

2018写作预测 英语二 折线图 共享单车为例

英语二还有个饼图,咱们写一个来看。

其他的,诸如表格,切记:表格和图是一体两面罢了。


先顺便说两句四六级,强调写作时灵活的重要性。

今天四六级考试中,

四级作文:how to best handle the relationshop between teachers(parents等) and students.

如何解决师生关系;家长孩子关系。就是个建议信,代入就可以了。可以套用我冲刺课讲过的(加强学习“培训”,端正态度,强调奖惩)。记住,你的建议只代表你自己的态度,无所谓对错,只有句子是否合适。

六级作文:Seek to understand(help,respect等) others, and you will be understood

理解别人,也会被别人理解(帮助,尊重)等。议论文,可以套用老刘给出的英语一第一个(担当责任的好处那个文章),分析这样做的好处。


灵活运用我们讲过的,公众号我给出的作文,没什么不可以被攻克。加油吧!



书归正传,咱们来写饼图。

话题呢,老刘掐指一算,我就选一个:中国人2017年支付方式图。

老刘手绘,做的不是很理想,我想弄一个3D的,不知道为什么总是2D

第一段:描述

This pie chart illustrates the proportion of different modes of payments in China in 2017. It can be seen that WeChat Pay takes a comparatively large share, accounting for 38%while Alipay also takes away 35% of the whole proportion. By contrast, the proportion of cash payment only accounts for 22%



第二段:

It is not difficult to analyze some possible factors contributing to this situation. Thanks to the massive user base and various payment scenarios in China,  mobile payment like Alipay and WeChat Pay has enjoyed absolute advantages in market competition.Mobile payment can also be used for transferring money, and users can pay family or personal bills through it, such as water and electricity bills. Its convenience enables China to edge its way towards being a cashless society. Besides convenience, mobile payment has a lot of advantages that cash payment can't match: much cleaner, more secure and no need for odd change. 

下面我来逐句讲解:

It is not difficult to analyze some possible factors contributing to this situation. 

老刘今年推荐的主旨句,言简而意赅,符合我的性格。


On the one hand, thanks to the massive user base and various payment scenarios in China,  mobile payment like Alipay and WeChat Pay has enjoyed absolute advantages in market competition.

thanks to 表示因为

一方面,得益于庞大的用户基础和中国的各种支付场景,如支付宝和微信支付之类的移动支付已经在市场竞争中获得了极大的优势。

Mobile payment can also be used for transferring money, and users can pay family or personal bills through it, such as water and electricity bills. Its convenience enables China to edge its way towards being a cashless society.

移动支付可以被用来转账,而用户也可以用来支付诸如水费电费等。其便利性使中国正走向一个无现金的世界。

On the other hand, besides convenience, mobile payment has a lot of advantages that cash payment can't match: much cleaner, more secure and no need for odd change. 

另一方面,除了便利性,移动支付还有很多优点是现金支付无法比拟的:更干净,更安全而且不需要零钱。


第三段:

According to the situation in the chart, the cash-free society is coming, and we will bid farewell to cash. So please protect your smart-phone. 

无现金社会到来了,我们终将和现金告别。所以请保护好你的智能手机哦。

此段,还可以用我给你们的万能结尾。都可以。

学习固然重要,休息也很重要。保重,晚安~


 


 
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